-Every important point made needs to relate back to the question. – Please add journals into this essay, by that I mean to use Journals to reference because the teacher is keen on journals and lot of research done other academic materials. Citing Authors for examples will be needed. -Structure= is the essay clearly organised?
Is there an effective introductions and conclusion? Is the main body organised into paragraphs? Are the points of the argument connected together? Is the argument logical? -Use of language and grammar = is the use of English accurate? Spelling and grammar correct? Using technical terms in the correct manner?